This is all rough draft. No edits, corrections, or grammar corrections.
I want to post this just to see the reaction of people that read it and see if I should keep going or not.
Critiques and helpful comments are highly appreciated.
Also, I have no figured out her name yet. So it`s supposed to be left unsaid
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Here is the link for my story!
http://figment.com/books/702502--untitled-for-now-
Sunday, September 29, 2013
Hunt for October Red
Inspired by the changing leaves from autumn; I just HAD to write this.
I have not wrote poetry for a long time, go easy with the comments and critiques.
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http://rwhan.deviantart.com/
https://www.facebook.com/artworkorrwhan?ref=hl
http://rwhanartwork.blogspot.com/
http://figment.com/users/218398-Rwhan
A link to my figment account!
I have not wrote poetry for a long time, go easy with the comments and critiques.
~~~
http://rwhan.deviantart.com/
https://www.facebook.com/artworkorrwhan?ref=hl
http://rwhanartwork.blogspot.com/
"The leaves evolve into the shades of brilliant red;~~~
an approbation to the word October.
A lurid glow from the carvings of a hallow pumpkin.
Assuage to the change, with decorations held to an annual Sabbath.
A feeling you get when you`ve changed for the new coming year.
To the smell of pumpkin, cinnamon, and beloved sweets;
down to the unassailable warmth of a blanket.
When the candles lit and the wind sings its transcending tale;
everything is coherent to the word October,
with brilliant shades of red."
http://figment.com/users/218398-Rwhan
A link to my figment account!
My weekend(s)
My weekends just felt so awkward. I kept to myself being busy with editing my page one weekend. It edit, it look nice now, and I have been getting more page views. I wish I can more feed back or comments but honestly....some people just click favorite and be done with that.
Constructive feedback can be GREAT, even WONDERFUL for me.
And for the past three sets of weekends, its consisted of me working and unable to sleep as much as I like. However, this weekend was different. I managed to finally get up around 8-9ish instead of 7:30 exactly!
I still have a book report, a book outline, and a science article to finish. The science article s the only one I have not even started yet.
And right now I am watching the Phantom of the Opera. The 1925 version, so far its pretty interesting. So I will end this blog here.
Constructive feedback can be GREAT, even WONDERFUL for me.
And for the past three sets of weekends, its consisted of me working and unable to sleep as much as I like. However, this weekend was different. I managed to finally get up around 8-9ish instead of 7:30 exactly!
I still have a book report, a book outline, and a science article to finish. The science article s the only one I have not even started yet.
And right now I am watching the Phantom of the Opera. The 1925 version, so far its pretty interesting. So I will end this blog here.
Sunday, September 8, 2013
Newspaper Club
I want to join the newspaper club; I love writing, how else can I express it? Other than improve my writing technique. (I feel it needs a lot of work that needs to be done) I`s something new and it will help me get more active.
I`m not fully aware to write or what goal there is behind it. Just whatever comes to me, I have always had this "freelance" style with my writing. It could be poems, comments, a journal entry, or short stories.
The thing with short stories is that I have never wrote an actual novel.
"My mind is like clouds, some drift slowly while other go by fast. It can rain so hard you can`t tell where you want to go or what to write. It can be free like the sunlight, kissing away the sky to show a beloved promise of ideas. The sky always changes with different pictures and scenes. It never stays still, it always has to be in motion like a gust of wind bellowing the colors to change the sky like twilight to dawn. A paintbrush with different attributes to it`s canvas."
I`m always motivated and inspired, I just lack dedication to ideas over lengthy periods of time.
I think I just wrote something! hahaha!
There is one obstacle...not a lot of people are wanting t fully participated. Maybe I can talk to the head of the newspaper club about writing more then one article for the meeting on Tuesday. And when more people join I can leave an open article for them to work on.
This gets me so excited, but when I write. I needs to be interesting. Something that draws in a crowd.
I am considering of becoming a writer, a journalist, something.
I still have other ideas but this one picks at me more, a bigger hill that needs to be mowed over. That`s why I want to do this, I want to see what it feels like to have you`re writing published.
I`m not fully aware to write or what goal there is behind it. Just whatever comes to me, I have always had this "freelance" style with my writing. It could be poems, comments, a journal entry, or short stories.
The thing with short stories is that I have never wrote an actual novel.
"My mind is like clouds, some drift slowly while other go by fast. It can rain so hard you can`t tell where you want to go or what to write. It can be free like the sunlight, kissing away the sky to show a beloved promise of ideas. The sky always changes with different pictures and scenes. It never stays still, it always has to be in motion like a gust of wind bellowing the colors to change the sky like twilight to dawn. A paintbrush with different attributes to it`s canvas."
I`m always motivated and inspired, I just lack dedication to ideas over lengthy periods of time.
I think I just wrote something! hahaha!
There is one obstacle...not a lot of people are wanting t fully participated. Maybe I can talk to the head of the newspaper club about writing more then one article for the meeting on Tuesday. And when more people join I can leave an open article for them to work on.
This gets me so excited, but when I write. I needs to be interesting. Something that draws in a crowd.
I am considering of becoming a writer, a journalist, something.
I still have other ideas but this one picks at me more, a bigger hill that needs to be mowed over. That`s why I want to do this, I want to see what it feels like to have you`re writing published.
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